100 Words on Nervous
Another week has slipped by, sucked into the vortex of “past”. This past week for me was heavy, in a good way, like moving a box of beloved books and then reveling in that sore muscle haze while blowing the dust off the bindings, and rediscovering cherished stories and philosophical truths.
This week also brought a handful, or two, of new readers and writers, and it’s been delightful to read all of your 100 word stories on NERVOUS. My pick of the week is Slouchy. I just loved this short little piece of fiction:
She waited in the wardrobe, the spot her oldest brother favored. The air smelled musty. Her grandmother’s coats brushed against her cheeks and made her nose itch. She grew impatient. Really, this game had lasted far too long. She moved to let herself out and frowned to find no handle on the inside of the wardrobe. Why would there be? She banged on the wood, shouted for her sister, for anyone, but heard only silence, thick and oppressive. Clutching at coat hems, she slumped down and inhaled mightily, as if through scent she might summon their owner, and her release.
In other words:
- “An unrelenting wind chills…” by Element 22
- The future can make you nervous by Michael
- The envelope by Aurora Lee
- 10-60 by Northern Zazu
- “Nervous son?” by Angelgal
- Nervous No More by Secret Agent Mama
- Buying love by LouCeel
- It’s Defective Typewriter’s first time
- The Blind Date by Patti
- Hidden by That’s Live 2.0
- The Gauntlet by Gabriel Gadfly
That wraps up last week’s challenge, and going through that reminds me that it would be helpful to me if you all gave a title to your pieces so I don’t have to make one up. Sometimes that’s awfully fun, but sometimes I’m rushed.
This week’s challenge (for details on how to play, go here), comes from a book I picked up off someone’s shelf to pass some time, The Saturday Morning Murder: A Psychoanalytic Case (Michael Ohayon Mysteries, No. 1) by Batay Gur. The word is:
Breakfast
Write 100 words on it, post to your blog, and leave a comment here so we can find you. Challenge closes on Saturday-ish. Happy writing!
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Oh goody. Breakfast. My favorite meal.
i am very late to the game, but thought i’d play just for fun. here is my post on “nervous” called “The Beach.”
http://grownupsarelikethat.blogspot.com/2010/01/beach.html
http://innocentsaccidentshints.blogspot.com/2010/01/100-words-on-breakfast.html
Call it: “Breakfast Fail”.
Joining in for the first time. Here is my submission for ‘Breakfast.’
http://ifmomsaysok.wordpress.com/2010/01/18/its-only-breakfast/
As much as I don’t like to use the word boring, I would think that by some standards and opinions I would be considered a bore. Every day I wake up un-alarmingly at 6am, I walk the dogs and when I get home I feed them, and then I pan fry some pork sausage patties on an iron skillet. Once the patties are fried I place them on a paper towel, rinse the pan, glob on some butter and fry up a couple of eggs over easy. It’s a habit of mine that I don’t think I could break fast.
@Tom, hehehe. That was clever.
[…] It’s only breakfast 2010 January 18 tags: 100 Word Challenge, breakfast, Velvet Verbosity by Tara R. The 100 Word Challenge is a weekly writing prompt hosted by Velvet Verbosity. The idea is to take a single word, either through proses or verse, and tell a story in only 100 word.. no more, no less. The word this week is ‘Breakfast.” […]
I’m writing along for the first time and what a great word to start with! Off I go…
love this exercise! i’ll be hanging around for a while. hope you don’t mind
Here’s my contribution for the week, Feast or Famine.
What fun! I’m a newbie, and here’s my entry on Breakfast. It’s called “Stark Light of Day”.
http://lifeinbalancesortof.wordpress.com/2010/01/19/100-word-challenge/
I had so much fun writing this. My Entry for breakfast is called, “Last Night” http://bit.ly/6Aw0f3
My offering for Breakfast, called “Conversation Over the Toast,” is posted.
Let’s see if I can get this link right the first time. This time.
My effort at “Breakfast” is here.
Ok, I happened across this page, so I am going to try and write about “Breakfast”. (This will be a good challenge for me, because writing is something I would love to do, but writing isn’t my thing. But I am going to try. So here I go. (Plus I am new to this whole blogging thing.) Plus I am not sure how to post my blog address to anything, so someone can come read my page???? maybe someone could help me here.
Confused in Blogville
Hi Christy, glad you found us and would like to give it a go. When you comment, there are three fields to add your name, your email address, and your website. Be sure to put your website address in that last field so we can find your blog. You can also cut and paste the url of the post into a comment here.
Here’s my entry:
“Breakfast”
http://aurora-lee.ca/Travel/index.php?option=com_content&view=article&id=169:breakfast&catid=53:challenges
(the prompts are always the titles for my pieces)
I wasn’t going to enter this week, but had a sudden flash of inspiration.
Here’s one of my sporadic entries!
http://notlivinginvain.com/2010/01/21/100-word-challenge-breakfast/
Hi! New challenger here. LouCeeL encouraged me to give it a try. Hope it’s okay.
I played:
http://www.slouchingmom.com/2010/01/scrambled-not-fried.html
I came here via Heather @ Cool Zebras. And before I read anything I wrote a post in 100 words. It has nothing to do with Breakfast…but I will post it this week and if its okay I would like to link back here…let me know!
Vapid Blonde - A OK by me. Let us know the link.
Thanks…I will.
My friend Texan Mama’s post for ‘Breakfast’ is here. I hope.
Here’s my post titled \Yankee Doodle Grapefruit\
http://onetoughvoncookie.com/?p=2209
Thanks, VV, for the reminder!